His eyes closed up and he was back tracking for his shorts and they were not anywhere.
He scratched his head and his legs were not in motion. He was feeling unhappy.
He whispered quietly to himself,"where are my shorts?".
We were learning about show don`t tell to make inferences about what the characters are feeling.
I found it easy to talk about Timo`s face body and voice.
I found it hard to find different words to backtracking.
I really enjoyed figuring what Timo might be thinking about and feeling.
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