His face was grouchy and his eyebrows went
Narrow.
His arms fell on his hips as he asked the dog “Where is my
Shorts?¨
He roared with excitement and said to his dad he couldn't find his socks.
He looked worried so he asked his dad “where are my socks”?
His elbows sank to his stomach and said to dad “are my socks in the laundry?”
We were learning about how to write using Show Don´t Tell. Show don´t tell is when you talk about his voice body and face.
I found it easy to describe other words than mad or vanished
I found it hard to figure out what his voice sounds like.
I really enjoyed writing about the characters actions and what they were saying.
Next time I need to write more about how they are feeling.