The loaves

We were learning about metaphors.

A metaphor compares 2 different things

in this poem the author used

metaphor to compare bread to clouds

and the sun is the oven.

We were learning about metaphors.

The bread is the clouds because the above is lumpy

and the bottom is flat.

I really enjoyed colouring my loaves and designs.

I found it hard to compare the metaphors because 

I did not know anything about metaphors. 

Next time I need to write out more metaphors 

about a story.

I found it easy to get help about my metaphors

and to learn about the metaphors.